I actually got tons of comments, mostly privately, especially regarding context issues, asking for clarification and again reporting a bunch of typos. As I work towards completing the investigation segment I present you the final intro demo update! I took the time to mostly polish stuff so that it looks closer to how I want it to look, changing and adjusting UI, removing unnecessary functions from the basic renpy package and adjusting most options. But don't take it from me, take it from this comprehensive list of changes:

• UI revamp, now it actually fits the overall theme
• Fancy "history" screen
• Corrected EVEN MORE TYPOS HOW WERE THERE STILL THIS MANY
• Improved backgrounds, café scenes and CGs
• New sprites! To add some more variation and information
• Added some sound effects
• New dialogue and minor alterations
• Added more screen transition effects

As always, thanks for reading and for your feedback!!